Storytime - Young alum looking for resume feedback

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FSU YOUNG ALUM LOOKING FOR RESUME FEEDBACK

By MAX LEISTEN

A question we often get is “is Protopia also for alumni looking for help?”

Of course! We’ve built it to be truly for everyone in your community, from prospects to retired alumni, to faculty and staff, researchers, parents, etc. Not only because community needs to be inclusive but each question generates powerful alumni & donor engagement (and fundraiser leads). So ask away!

In fact, one third of questions are from alumni (predominantly recent graduates) looking for assistance with their careers.

And super smart alumni (like this one from Florida State) focus on the smallest, simplest favor one could ask for to “meet” others in your field: a resume review. Everyone has an opinion and loves seeing how others showcase their professional experience. Plus, as a recipient you get to meet potential talent without commitment.

Contacted Alumni: 20
Email Open Rate: 80%
Clickthrough Rate: 25%
Engagement Rate: 15%

Keep it simple!

Max

The "ask"

Hello! My name is ALUM, and I graduated with my Master’s in Integrated Marketing Communications in May 2023. In April 2021, I earned my Bachelor of Science in Digital Media Productions, Double Major in Sports Management.

I currently have a part-time, remote role but am looking for a full-time position that is ideally in-person or hybrid. I have been applying for social media, marketing and graphic design roles in Charlotte, NC and Atlanta, GA with little success. I would greatly appreciate someone with marketing and communications experience to review and critique my resume and portfolio.

Thank you in advance for your time and insights. Go ‘Noles!

The "give" (1 of 2)

Hi ALUM,

I’m happy to connect. I just started a new job myself and have been really busy getting up to speed in the new role. If you’d like to connect, I’m happy to have a phone call in a few weeks.

Here is my email free feel to reach out and we can schedule something to see if I can offer any advice:

ALUM@gmail.com

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